Taryn:
cheeks likes roses and a heart like buttercups,
we are glued and shall be for ever,
high spirits and values we share,
and don't forget her funny hiccups!
Katie:
mightier then the pen and the sword,
she pleases the king and queens and lords,
genius and talented in every way,
my meadow of joy- my bestie every day!
Rachel:
Funny as beans she laughs with me,
my lion tamer- my joker my setter free,
A book of comedy must be her brain,
the dove that keeps my dear sole sane!
Simone:
Heart of gold and dancing queen,
your talent unstoppable, as every one has seen,
Face like an angel and my friend for ever,
laughing in the distance we'll be seen together!
Zoe:
Poetic like the unimaginable she stands before me,
reciting gold, i cannot believe what i see,
i value my priceless gorgeous friend,
I'll always be there, she'll see- till the very end.
A contest entry
- when... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 4, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - YOUR ANGELS OF MERCY THAT WAS THERE FOR YOU by mcheadle.
600 points, ended July 20, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contests for kids under 14:Write about some one you care for by pop123.
525 points, ended July 8, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 and under: Your Special Someone! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended September 29, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An enthusiastic tribute to all of your friends, I like how you make each one of the personal. No wonder you have won several contests with this one! Good rhyme scheme, it all flows together. I can see that your a bubbly, energetic person with lots of friends! You go girl
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Very nice dedication to your friends. They sound like cool people. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck. Brian
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good
it was nice i liked the rhyming
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Wow, you are a creative young soul..Rose...writing so well about your friends..You are a very personable affectionate loyal friend, I can see...and you have a lot of promise ahead for you...and you amaze me..I guess I feel drawn to you also because I have been called Rose, because my real name is Rosemary, and my pen name is Rose Angel...so you are in the right place with other Roses in AP too...Wonderful write!
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I finall have you where I wanted you
Wow you are on the HM list at last. enjoy...mac -
I sent for help to get you on as HM
Things are never simple. I don't make very good mud pies for some reason. Still trying to get you on the list...mac -
Your trophy is Honorable mention
thank you for entering.mac -
Your reward is Honorable mention
You poem was much more than this I believe your friends are angels that are with you every day. Bless you for thinking od me at this time and entering my contest...mac -
Your reward is Honorable mention
You poem was much more than this I believe your friends are angels that are with you every day. Bless you for thinking od me at this time and entering my contest...mac -
Wow,this poem is amazing.Good luck!
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Wonderful Congratulations on the well deserved gold
Gaylene
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Every little friend counts
beauty can be seenin all of us....mac
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Humm..I like the sketches you made here..a wonderful scenario you have built..I love this ..tahnks for your beautiful entry ....
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Thank you very much I'm glad you liked it!
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What a very beautiful dedication to your frinds...I am sure they shall all love it and be pleased...sounds like you have some keepers here...very nicely done in form and layout...best to you!
mystic
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thank u - again. I hope this time I actually get a proper medal! aaah!
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Welcome To Allpoetry
Hi Michaella
This is a beautiful poem and i love how you've put names and something written underneath. Well done and keep up the writing
Andy
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beautiful!!!
what beautiful poems!!!
your friends will love you to death when they see this
this is a wonderful poem
keep going!!!
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