I nside of my mind all day and night
M emories and fantasies of you intertwined
I magination running like a wild horse
S usceptible to both heartbreak and bliss
S itting here with tears in my eyes
Y ou're forever the owner of my heart
O ne day in one life, we will be together
U nder the gorgeous sun, living in paradise
Author notes
Self explanatory...just came to my head...I miss her so much and I know she misses me too...
A contest entry
- I Miss You by remembering Jo.
450 points, ended July 15, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Release Me by sensualbutterfly.
300 points, ended July 28, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love it! I love the way you took the Title and made the poem from there! Excellent. Superb. Touching. I will say it again...I love it. Thank you for entering the contest
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Wow this poem is amazing! it's a simple acrostic form but the message is so powerful and clear. Wonderful job hun
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Oh, dood, that was like. Whoa, that was really good. I can relate, and i liked it a lot. And i feel really stupid because i just got that like the first letter to each line and then you look down is like " i miss you" haha, so i feel stupid. But I think that's really cool how you did that.
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i love your acrostics...you're so talented with them!! the words flow beautifully, and the imagery is great too =)
just that underlying "i miss you" message...pops right out through your words, even if it wasnt (literally) spelled out right there
great work =)
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