I'm lost in my thoughts of you..
A second without you.. and suffer I do
I think about your face, imprinted in my mind,
I say without pause you're one of a kind
I'm helpless without you love..
Even amongst diamonds you're a cut above.
I eagerly await opportunities to taste your lips,
For me, there's magic in your loving kiss..
I long to hold you.. for eternity,
Nothing in life is more important than you and me
My heart, I left vulnerable.. you came and stole
I'm lost without you.. because you own my soul.
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Swangrnv
A contest entry
- very simple capture me by Nikki Rowles.
1100 points, ended July 30, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice!
This was very captivating. This should at least place if not take home the gold.. This was an enjoyable read for me friend! Good luck in the contest! I know you should get something for this amazing write! Keep the muse alive! Well done!
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Thanks!
Your sweet comments are a reward in themselves! thanks again my friend, I appreciate your support!
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Such a blessing to experience love that permeates every fiber of your being.
So much more meaningful and longer-lasting than the lust-of-a-moment kind. Good luck in the contest friend. 
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AAWW..
You are so kind to me! thank you my friend!
I truly appreciate your support and the wonderful comment you always leave!
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This is beautiful! I'm with ears2hearyou on the excellent swoon factor here.
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Thanks!
You making me blush also! gosh I very moved by your response! Thank you so much my dear friend!
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Great write I can sense the deep love you have for this woman this is one of your best write on!
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Thank you!
I really appreciate your wonderful comment my friend!
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Wow..
This is so sweet even! l.o.l. Thanks a bunch for your comments!
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group swoon.........swoooooooon..
i hope you are happy now...all the poetess's just
held a group swoon to honor your poem!
way to write and feast our hearts!
ears/SEattle
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What????...
The whole gang's here? Wow ears you are amazing, to gather all these folks up for little ole me! l.o.l. j.k. Thanks alot my friend always love to see you visit, bless my page!
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This is the kind of write that would definately melt and capture soul. Your poetry here shows great depth of feeling, and love radiates from within this heart splayed red across the page...Beautiful and warm. alby
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Thanks!
Such wonderful words my friend! I appreciate
your support so much, thank you again!
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Well done, brother. It's a shame I rarely feel this way about anyone... Um... No, it's not! I'm happy where I am now. LOL Good luck and write on. One.
Dez
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Thanks
l.o.l. yeah, every now and again I go back to what I was known for back in the day! l.o.l.
But don't tell anyone they might think I like quiche or something! l.o.l. seriously though thanks alot my friend.
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Wow..this is so heartfelt Swan..been awhile didn't read your romantic pieces..this one is no exception..it got Rich's stamp on it..your words are always fantastic..best of luck in the contest
Ruby
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Thank you!
I can't hold a candle to you shorty!
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As you inspire me:
Lost, come here
Within the shadows
Of the fire
Breathe in my scent
I am lively, vivid,
Full of desire
Within this moment
I am yours
Close your eyes
Place heated lips
Well upon mine
Deliverance I surmise…
Embrace me now
Tighter within
Your open arms
Doesn’t matter how
Just caress me please
And fill me with
Your promising charms…
Take me…
Well done...Passionspromise
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Well done yourself!
Your add is amazing, but I don't why I was surprised, as you make amazing writes all the time! Thank you so much for your support my friend!
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