For acception

We thickin the worlds words,
with pretetious theories about nothing.

Sumblime thoughts whirl,
in minds of chaos.

Divine questions,
are followed by sinful answers.

They define us as people,
and balance our social order.

Lack lust images,
litter our hopes and dreams.

We fight the darker side,
of the lives we live each day.

Lies about us,
told to those we love and hate.

Not by another,
but from our own lips.

All of this,

is not for us.

It is for,
acception.

A contest entry

Best Prewrites From July 2008 by amaranthine lover. 2800 points, ended November 18, 2008, 37 entries
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amaranthine lover
August 31, 2008
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Thanks for the entry, 'twas much appreciated.
sassykitty
August 15, 2008

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I like the abstraction of imagery and metaphor here, the couplet verses also work well in communicating the feelings of the poetic voice towards the subject. Very impressive write - thought the final two stanzas were just sublime and I for one can most certainly relate to this situation. Good luck in your contest, thanks for sharing and your kind comment on my 'Hell..' piece. Most appreciated. Cheers.