Will you talk to me with words of love
Will you cherish me like a pure white dove
Will you make my heart sing a true love song
Will you make my feet dance all day long
Will my eyes shine like a winter moon
Will you be in my arms sometime soon
Will you think of me as being fine
Will you one day...When you are mine
Please tell me what you think
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Dan, This is wonderful! I was sitting here thinking after reading this gem, how much you have learned and grown, since joining ap. Your writing is more seasoned, and you have a style and grace that is above reproach! I absolutely fell in love with this poem, for it is very well written and thought out. The real longing here shows and shines. Wonderful writing!
~S~G~
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Thank you
Thank you very much for an extremely satisfying comment on my write...I am pleased you enjoyed the read..regards Dan x
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Dad,
Now this one, I could almost hear it being whispered in my ear, as I was reading it. What a wonderful job you did on this one! I love it!
and love
Nyetta
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Glad you liked it Nyetta
The musings of a lonely heart are nonetheless real!..Dad xx -
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Yes They are real Dad, I know that and know it well. Sad to say.
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