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Drowning Within You






You are the poetry that come out of my mouth.
Your love the muse that dances in my heart.
I sing of you every second that I’m alive.

Each of your kisses are a stanza
Your presence is the rhythm and rhyme of my soul.
You make mystery upon my face with your fingers.

Your breath upon my face is the wind swirling metaphors
Settling upon similes.

How happily I am drowned in this pool.
Under your depths I have no desire to surface.
If this is dying I can live in it forever.








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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    August 3

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    Beautifully written and a wonderful
    thought for this contest! Congrats
    to you on your silver and good luck
    with this contest!




    Jeremy0826

  • KayJay46 gold member
    August 3

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    What a great love poem... Nice flow and rhythm, emotional without being too sappy Well deserving of the honor and what I was hoping for here...
    Well done!
    Ken