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Job’s song to God






Like fleeting shadows I will not endure.
I am as ephermal as a flower.
My heart is sullied my soul impure.
Like fleeting shadows I will not endure
Theres no remedy no sight of a cure.
No angel standing as tall as a tower.
Like fleeting shadows I will not endure
My life is ephermal as a flower.




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  • very well written

    you put so much into a few words, the Lord Speaks in many voices, thank you for sharing and entering this contest..Lin


  • BellaD
    July 2

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    So sad!

    Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't Job ultimately endure and triumph? Great poem. Liked your word choices.