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Apollo and Hyacinthus







Yours is the suffering mine is the crime.
Wherever your blood drops a flower blooms.
Competition has no reason or rhyme.
Yours is the suffering mine is the crime.
I wont forget you as years pass the time.
Oh! The pain of unintentional dooms.
Yours is the suffering mine is the crime.
Wherever your blood drops a flowers blooms.












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  • OrangeMarmalade silver member
    July 2

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    This is interesting

    I've not seen anything like this. It's like a riddle with all the insinuations; I'm not sure just what to make of it. But as a poem, it's very well done. I guess it's just lack of background or AN.