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Leisure

Davies was almost right when he wrote that verse of his;
Pointing out the wonders that active people miss.
But I find its not enough to simply stand and stare;
For I get a greater pleasure sitting in a chair.

Within the quiet atmosphere of a rural country scene
There's a wealth of activity behind each leafy screen.
And though you can still observe it standing on your feet;
It's so much more relaxing in a comfy seat.

It's grand to watch a seascape from atop a handy cliff--
Though prolonged perpendicularity tends to make one stiff.
And vertigo which can cause a person's teeth to clench
Is easily avoided using a boulder for a bench.

Wandering in the countryside hearkening to the avian chorus
Is another of the pleasures that nature spreads before us.
But it's beauty is enhanced if I can comfortably perch
Using a fallen limb like a pew in an outdoor church.

My personal choice is watching the squirrels frisk and frolic
Causing heady intoxication with no need for liquids alcoholic.
And though I can stand there watching like a love struck fool
I would be even happier sat upon a stool.

So I'll continue my wanderings and, pausing as I go,
I'll enjoy all the bounties mother nature can bestow.
But along with boots and rucksack there's something else I'd pick ---
And that's my beloved shooting stick!

Author notes

I used to quote William H Davies' poem Leisure http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/6303-William-H-Davies-Leisure whilst standing and catching my breath on rambles o'er hill and dale. I'm getting a bit long in the tooth now and prefer sitting for a breather.

BTW
A shooting stick has nothing to do with guns, it is simply a combination walking stick and seat.

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Comments

  • Stopping to enjoy!

    I like your poem and it makes sense as well. Nothing compares with getting out of the familiar chair and gadding about the countryside ... pausing all along the way! joy

    • Yep I'm still a committed rambler (in speech as well as the countryside) but I'm not as young and fit as I once was Hope you enJoy it too.
      Anyway thanks for reading and writing.
      Jim