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Concealed

 
 
 
Footsteps on the pavement
time chased away the youth
of gentle hands and beauties grace
The lack of memories truth 
 
Distance is the reality
Once joined by the seems
Moments played out long ago
left broken shattered dreams
 
The curtain finally closes
on a life no longer real
Just something that happened long ago
A life that age concealed 

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 8, 2008

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    Awwww
    Beautifully sad, this created a world unknown to naked eyes and envoked emotions within

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • kirbysman Moderators member
    July 3, 2008

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    Great take on that photo, Nikki. Nice concise and clear write. Love the rhyming and the ending as well. Good luck in the contest.

    Love ya -
    Grampa Paul