In soft words spoken
with your loving gaze,
I hear gentleness...
I see visions embellished of love
running deeply into forever...
Contently, my soul sighs
in the way you look at me,
Dare not I blink,
held in passion's trance,
as I whisper...
don't close your eyes.
Author notes
Photo by Google Images from www.nocaptionneeded.com
The Eyes Have It..
A contest entry
- The Eyes Have It by breedluv.
1300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great imagery--Beautifull flow of verse & Good luck in the contest!!!
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Thank you very much sir. Much appreciated
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Elegant. This is a beautiful poem, well written, and wonderful sentiment.
Russell -
Gave me a little shiver of loveliness across my skin reading this! The first stanza is just gorgeous and the sentiment in the last one is wonderful... I wouldn't want to blink either!
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Thank you dear, your comments mean alot to me. You're just so sweet to an old lady
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excellent~
One of my first reads of yours
So nice to meet you too...
Excellent take on the prompt...
Love the imagery as well...
I saw where you held a contet...and loved the pic...
I am a pic fanatic and was wondering where you got it
Best of luck in the contest...this is a winner in my book
Beautiful...soft..romantic...and sensual...
Do hope you come visit me as well
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you for such a lovely comment, and it's a pleasure to meet you as well. I'm not sure which pic you may be referring too, as I have a few that people have emailed me, or I get them online either google or deviantart. I appreciate your kind words.
Linda
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This is a beautiful and sensual take on the picture prompt. You did a nice job with this poem. Best of luck to you in the contest. Blessings, Patty
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I appreciate you nice comment, thank you so much. I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
Linda
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Nice job. I hope that you can experiance this first hand very soon. I wish you the very best in the contest.
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I appreciate your kind words my friend..I hope I can find that soon too, but I won't hold my breath, I might turn blue and look like a smurf lol But you can tell me what it feels like hehe
Linda
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Sis,
Ok, you are reading my mind yet again
And how I feel at this moment thinking of one certain handsome man....*sigh*
Ohhhhhhh, did I say that
I love this!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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lol Yep you said that hehe, thank you sweet one for your lovely comment.
and love
Linda -
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yeah, bet you can't guess where my mind is tonight and especially after what happened today.... *sigh* definately a die-hard romantic
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Why your mind is in the clouds isn't it? lol along with your heart and soul.
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The whole of it was gentleness.
I enjoyed it much.
Be Well
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Thank you, that's very sweet of you.
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