layla smith was a pretty, blonde headed girl,
you would always see her giving her hair a twirl.
she jumps and dances and runs all around,
she loves hide "n" seek but hates to be found.
she is a very happy and hyper girl,
she lives in a very happy world.
A contest entry
- Anything you want by MrCrepsley.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 184 entries
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Hi good luck in your contest! I hope you get something 'cause I'm sure you deserve it! Good job! I really enjoyed reading about Layla. The only thing is that on the title you wrote Layla Simth instead of smith. I don't think it matters though. All the best from...
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Aww lalya sounds like an awesome girl
Sorta like me when i was a tad smaller
Great write, I hope you do well in the contest!
Claire x
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