Why do you talk to me
With such disgust in your voice
I live here in this prison like home
Because I have no other choice
My mother doesn't love me
I can see that in her eyes
She looks at me in deceitful ways
Like it's me she must despise
She thinks that constructive problem solving
Starts with a series of screams
She haunts me day and night
Clouding my once pleasant dreams
What did I do so wrong
In this life I was given?
Why is my mothers hatred towards me
So raw and so driven?
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Sometimes a mother is jealous of her children for many things. The most common is due to attention. It's sad things like this happen, but does. Which puts you in a bad position for you never asked to be in that spot. I just want to reach out and give you a BIG
, so there it is (again ). I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "To Be Put On My Favorites List."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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very sad piece, thank you for entering
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such a sad piece.
thanks for entering,,
good luckk -
Sad
This is a moving piece that etches deep and difficult thoughts
Some do feel so hurt by the lack of love from the one person who
should love and care for you
Thanks for sharing
Julie x -
Wow so much feeling... Thank you
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this is how my mom makes me feel.
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