If your calling about my heart it's still yours
I tried to pretened I didn't love you anymore
But the truth was so much easier to see
That you would always have a part of me
I tried to walk away so many times
Yet I always found myself by your side
The tears I cry never go away
Even if I'm with you they find a way
The smile on your face brings me joy
I only wish that it would never go away
When I'm with you my life is never dull
But when your away it gets harder everyday
Just one look in your eyes and I'm floating in the sky
The way you hold me brings me down
To a safer place when your around
I keep your picture by my bed
To remind me that it wont be long until your home
And I can be in your arms again
Many people said our love would never last
The chance of us making it to forever were very slim
But if we pull through we'll still have each other in the end
My heart skips a beat when your near
And I know my love for you is unreal
No one could ever love you more
I tried my best to let you go
To show them that even if we didn't make it to forever
I'd be strong and move on
It doesn't work and I think you know why
You only want to be with me so you made it impossible for me to leave
When I would try to walk away you'd let me go
But only so you could call me and remind me of the love we shared
You had no intentions of ever letting me go
I'm so glad that you didn't
So if your calling about my heart it's still yours
I'll never try to pretend I don't love you anymore
Because we were ment to be
And you'll always have a part of me
Please tell me what you think
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Nice job!
I want to compliment you for sharing this touching piece of poetry that came from your heart. Quite beautiful!! THANKS!!
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wow so beautiful
loved it. it sumfin lotsa ppl can relate to. it just so gawjuz. -
Wow fabulous imagery!
Love the line that goes "If your calling about my heart it's still yours" that is just fantastic, and it will stick in my mind forever, it says so much as a stand alone line that it is hard to forget. Just love that line!
Your poem is a piece of poetic artistry so well sculpted too and great well used descriptives. Deep moving sentiments too.
Well done its brilliant and should be in print. Love it.
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc. xx
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it is cool and romantic
i hope u are as lovely as your poem or poetry -
So very beautiful! *tear*. This sounds like a song to me... I can almost hear it Great work!
JADE RAYNE*
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You are a very lucky person. Your form was good and I hoped all the way through that it was written from personal experience. Pen on...
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