Surrendering
to your strong advance
I lie on my back
your legs straddling my body
fingers strum your soft nipples
In heated passion
of an instinctual swivel
our bodies on fire
we quench in the wet smoothness
our heated and lathered skin.
Falling upon me
in relief of orgasm
I hold you firmly
as you twitch occasionally
I feel myself inside you.
Even now thinking
of the moments we made love
my breath escapes me
and my heart cannot slow down
this deep racing pulsation.
In a list
A contest entry
- LOVERS by Tender wolf.
750 points, ended July 15, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lost my breath and had to read again...smiles...breath taking poetry and i thank you kindly for entering


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I will be back to read this again, now I need to get in the shower!






