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On My Skin

Lies and truths always one
For they lie on my skin
Tell me wonderful things
Whispered into my ear
Secrets so sweet and untrue

On my skin again
Luck paid its price
Worked so much pain
Illusioned my rights

Welcoming my own hell
Heaven is so far away
Listening to pretty words
Listening to petty words

On my skin again
Glistening sweetly
Things killing me

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  • WiltedRose0777
    July 3, 2008

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    Hmm, this is an interesting poem. It flowed very well, and I think we can all relate to being in a situation where we feel there is no mercy. Good job.