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Lie To Me

Everything i know
Is shattered to pieces
The simplest things
continue to escape me.
I don't know if i'll ever
Break this
But i know, in the end,
"we" aren't gonna be.


Lie To Me
Just to prolong my sanity
From ditching me

Lie To Me
You are my everything
I'm losing you,so easily
Just ..
Lie ..
To ..
Meeeee.


Tell me that you'll always love me
Tell me that you'll always care
Tell me that you'll never leave me
Tell me you'll always be there.
Lie.....
To....
Me.

Lie To Me
Just to prolong my sanity
From ditching me

Lie To Me
You are my everything
I'm losing you,so easily
Just ..
Lie ..
To ..
Meeeee.

In The end
I'll be questioning
When i see you
walk out the do'
I'll look to the broken Glass
That lays, all over the flo'

Then i see myself
& I'm amazed.
Laying there a puddle of blood.
I see the gash
From the glass that passed
From your hand.
..

Lie To Me
Just to prolong my sanity
From ditching me

Lie To Me
You are my everything
I'm losing you,so easily
Just ..
Lie ..
To ..
Meeeee.

No one wants to accept their death

Author notes

Ok so..It may not make much since to you. Though, it's a song. It'd be much better if you heard it.

Yes, if you're wondering. She's a spirit who didn't understand that cold shoulder and silence from her partner. Though, in the end she understands it's because she was dead (He killed her). && Of course he couldn't hear her. Of course he acted like she didn't exist..She..didn't.

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  • kavi22
    July 29, 2008
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    Wow this is amazing! I loved it. It had so much meaning. Thanks for entering!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 8, 2008

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    I know how it feels to just want someone to lie to you, to pretend they care just so you can feel that comfort, even if it's just for a short time. Definately can relate to this emotion, sorry you know how it feels also.


  • Cptn Puddlez
    July 8, 2008

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    Well, basicly theres only 2comments. The rest are you having a slightly funny conversation about singing with your friend. .-. (you can sing) Anyways I like it a lot, although I doubt i'll like the song. =/ Oh well, but it was very good and I loved it. ^-^


  • Melissa Elizabeth
    July 7, 2008
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    I like this one, it says alot. Its a great write as always!


  • Nothing But No
    July 7, 2008
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    OMGOODNESS

    As much as I hated [well strongly disliked] the do' and flo' in the piece once I read that it was meant to be heard as a song I understood and the hate faded. =]

    I love it, it is absolutely encompassing to me right now. I have a melody for it in my head and really it's just making my malicious self giggle mercilessly. You're a star. Best of luck in your contest ma belle!

    • Poetic Obscenity
      July 7, 2008
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      ^^

      Yeah. I had my quirks about it too. However, when sung(with my..accent. -grumbles- )That's how it turns out to keep beat.
      I'm glad you understand.

      Hehe. YAY! I want to hear you sing it, damnit!!!


      • Nothing But No
        July 7, 2008
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        I have a terrible singing voice!!! Argh! Your singing voice is tooo good, tooo good!


        • Poetic Obscenity
          July 7, 2008
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          PSH!

          That's a lie!! I love your voice.

          o.o && I suck. badly.


          • Nothing But No
            July 7, 2008

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            You're a fucking liar, and see I swore that's how badly you lie =P You are a cuss inducing agent madame.

            • Poetic Obscenity
              July 7, 2008
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              T.T

              I know the title is "lie to me" but..it's just a poem Katie. I'm not actually asking you to lie..so..

              -duct tapes mouth shut-

              =] ahh. That's better.


              • Nothing But No
                July 7, 2008
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                LOL- knobhead. I wasn't lying I was being truthful, I am a very truthful faery you knows. Word up.


                • Poetic Obscenity
                  July 7, 2008
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                  ^^

                  That, i am.
                  Aww.. Faery!! -dances-

                  ...Faeries should sing. -nod nod-


                  • Nothing But No
                    July 7, 2008
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                    Faeries should NOT sing, ever! Well not this faery anyways.

                    • Poetic Obscenity
                      July 7, 2008

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                      Lies. Lies lies!!

                      =] You will sing for meee..because ily.

                      && Your voice makes me HAPPY..


                      I often listen to joo singing teh vampyre song..yess..=]

                      I still have it.


                      • Nothing But No
                        July 7, 2008
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                        AH!

                        You still have the vampyre song?!? Oh my God! Burn it!

                        • Poetic Obscenity
                          July 7, 2008
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                          Hehehe

                          Yes, I do. && I love it. I cherish it. I will NEVER delete it. Nor burn it.

                          hehe. Now you must add to my collection, yessss...

                          Sing to me, my lovely.

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