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peach honeycomb

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scented sunbeams,

     set sail upon mornings song,

- let loose your promise once pure -

 

roses of peach nectar,

     delicate fragrance aloft,

- lay your honeycomb petals upon my breast -

 

tightly woven cocoon of birch,

     caressing entwined bodies under your canopy,

- shade us from this day of haste - 

Author notes

Colours:

Peach

Combined colours of Birch

Waxy Honeycomb

 

Pic Credit:

 

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  • Nienna Calmcacil
    September 23, 2008
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    Wow. Quite a sensual little poem you've got there. Thanks for submitting it =)


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    September 22, 2008

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    Nice work!

    Love this! Such a delicate weaving of metaphor & words that paint lovely visions! Interesting how you picked each word & built a very visual scene around each! Bravo poet! Dreamy....


  • Gwenevere
    August 1, 2008

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    Ah those scented sunbeams that waft through the air.a lovely lilting piece of poetry that brings summer into the readers room,Ros


  • stavykm gold member
    July 26, 2008

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    Just jBeautiful

    The imagery in this is outstanding and I just loved it. You did a beautiful job on this one. I so admired your writing style. I have so much to learn that is for sure. It's always a pleasure to read your poetry. Thank you for sharing with me. Peach Honeycomb, just beautiful!!!
    Many Blessings
    Much Love Always
    Kelle Marie


  • Sandygram
    July 10, 2008

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    Beautiful Words

    Well you never cease to amaze me with your poetry. It is always a pleasure to read and it always fills the senses with beauty. Your inmagery is breathtaking. Best of luck dear friend. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy


  • dark cajun shadow
    July 4, 2008

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    ohh my this is pure bliss! It makes me want to lean back and nap under the canopy...I loved this poem!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 3, 2008
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    ooops
    Forgot these.

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 3, 2008

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    Wonderful snippets of descriptives laced with humble prayer. I don't quite know if it gets more serene than this.

    Lovely work. Thank you for a splendid entry. ~Pamela


  • NeonRose
    July 3, 2008
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    Beautifully done, Bear..This reads like a prayer. Best to you in the contest!


  • maralisa silver member
    July 3, 2008

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    roses of peach nectar,delicate fragrance aloft,ightly woven cocoon of birch, caressing entwined bodies under your canopy,- shade us from this day of haste - wow this is so wonderful good luck in the contest


  • StarEyes
    July 2, 2008

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    My Dear Uncle,

    This is fantastic!! What a beautiful read this one is! In some ways it reminded me of one I did a while back, Peach Blossom Comfort, not sure if you have read it or not, but this is just as comforting and amazing!

    Best of luck to you in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

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