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perfection

The form of existence,
In search of perfection,
Is deeply persistent,
And constantly questioned.

One gains recognition,
So abandon the glory.
To burn at the stake,
Is to start a new story.

Rise from the ashes,
Of former delusion.
Re-create Babylon,
And seal with confusion.

Construct a tall tower,
Forget past rejection.
Reach to the Gods,
To find perfection.

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  • LionessK
    July 4, 2008

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    welcome to allpoetry

    Impressive writing...
    this is a powerful piece with a lot of meaning. You did an excellent job putting your thoughts into poetic form here. Thank you for sharing your words and talent with us all. I hope you will continue to do so.


    ~Kristy


  • Spiritual Soul gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    ooh I like this, especially the last 2 lines,
    "Reach to the Gods,
    To find perfection."
    Because only God is perfect. Awesome rhyme I enjoyed this a lot, lots of images and metephors. Keep it up!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~
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