I am no one
You may read and think you know different,but it can't be
I'M ALL IN YOUR HEAD
I don't exist...never did
The only thing that makes me real are YOUR thoughts,YOUR feelings,YOUR words
You feed a non-entity with your dreams and desires
Ask for feedback from nothing,
that same no one
Look inside yourself for the answers...
I am no one...
I can't tell you what you need...
I can't tell you everything's going to be o.k.
I can't save you with words...
Remember...
I am no one...
If you listened to me,you'd only hear yourself,
you'd only hear what you want to hear...
NOW...
ISN'T...
THAT...
CRAZY...
Author notes
I know I am but so are you
A contest entry
- Freedom in Madness by EntombedCrystalRose.
525 points, ended July 17, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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550 points, ended January 18, 21 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Oranges don't have handles, but lemons do. My old Honda Accord had four on the inside, four outside.
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"Madness is like intelligence. When you have it, you don't think much of it. When it leaves you, you wonder where it went."
Love your poem!
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Wow, this made me think through out. Clever write
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I thank you...and so do you..
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...ooooh...clever...maybe I was over thinking the whole thing but that's what makes it so provoking to my mind...I thought that it was something that you were talking about...but then my basic logic said nothing...but then again...some people think that nothing is something...and that something is nothing...and yet it is no one but at the same time in the head...yesh...I believe I'm over thinking it...well done...first poem to read in this contest and one that makes me go around in circles...I also liked the title because it paid no relevance to the poem content and didn't give away the ending...thank you for entering...
Oliver
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Thank you for your comment. Indeed knowing that it would make one "go around in circles" and maintains a "thought provoking" quality is a well recieved compliment. Again...thank you.
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this makes me giggle with joy. i liked this poem/writting. madness can be a very fun and beautiful thing. a figment of my imagination. wonderful write. great job!
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I asked for madness, obtained it, and gained beauty on the way... very well done!! Thank you for the entry and good luck!
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lol
dudett...thats an awesome poem...stupendous(sp???)!!! >.<
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This makes me think of a song. Have you ever heard "Hello" by Evenescence? The theme is very similar. I did rather enjoy your take on it though. Well worded, well thought out. The only part I didn't understand was the title. But then I suppose it's just part of the madness, isn't it?
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This is beautiful madness, just so thought provoking almost eeiry, something I will read over and over again. Sheer mad genius, just spectacular. Best of luck to you, no one.
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