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~Breathe Marionette~

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Stardust particles touch marionette's,
breathing life into porcelain beauty.
Eternal flames light warmth into
steadfast hearts, as crows wings applaud.

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  • marlene47 silver member
    July 2

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    I like the stardust breathing life into the marionette... the flames warming the heart - all to applause from above.
    Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene

  • AngelWithDarkWings gold member
    July 2

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    Beautiful

    absolutely beautiful poem.. you did an excellent job with this prompt. I love 2nd and 3rd lines..

    good luck

    kat


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 2

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    A beautiful picture and a beautiful poem to go along with it. I really enjoyed it. Such a short poem, yet filled with so much. Great job. =)

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