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Glimpsing rainbows, Flaming into life.

It was petrol,
Lying so unseen.
Glimpsing rainbows,
But generally blasé.

A mirrored pool,
Murky yet iridescent.
Waiting, waiting.
For action to arrive.

A spark, so fleeting.
Yet everything’s ablaze.
Dancing tongues,
Choking fumes.

Dying gently,
Initial excitement fading.
On edge, just dreading.
Inevitable extinguish.

Yet, it’s flaring up.
Flaming into life.
Ever fluctuating,
Permanent beacon.



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  • f1shm00
    July 3

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    Kinda of twisted. Twisted is good. sometimes. But in this case it is vell done m'luvvy.
    My fav part is 'Dancing tongues,/Choking Fumes.'