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Sister

What motivates me u ask
All i can say is the following to reply...

I have met one of the greatest person whose height is no more that an inch away from mine...
A new hero who is not in any comic book or PlayStation magazine...
This hero of mine possesses no much physical strenght or any super power that can be seen from any human eyes...
This champion has not trophy or any statue that symbolizes it's legacy...
This hero of mortal life is no different from you or I...
This hero...figurative speaking...left its wings in the paradise called heaven and descended to the human world to live a mundane life...
My hero's strength has no match...
In my eyes this unique conqueror posses even more strength that Hercules himself...
Alexander the Great is not even any match for this idol of mine...
I speak for myself and for what only i have seen.
There is no hero who can make u feel so alive and unique...

She was the one that called my name when the shadow of doubt was all i had left
She notice my existence and acknowledge my true feelings
When the weaponless enemy of drepression was about to devoured me
She fought against it all alone
She rescued me with her caring words
She was the light in my dark world

To a depress girl she was her only hope
If you need help just look around
Maybe you have soome there standing next to you and you haven't notice it...

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  • Poetic Drug
    July 4, 2008
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    i liked this this was acool peice it shows how much you love you sister and how good a bond you have with her. One thing i want to add though you had alot of spelling errors you might want todo spell check on this one and you tenses were mixed up but thanks for entering