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When It Rained (Not Finished)

When it rained
corridors made swamps
around the walls
leaving dead spiders
to hangs moses of tombs

then the air had blew against
the lady's feild of corn
and gather them all
her skirt too and her

I only sat to watch
the many rain as it
yelled to wet feilds
by my chair
as my fine husband was
reading a book

the pleasent morn
already taken watch
as it shook
the backyard
where all my cows
feirced underneath
the hays
the dogs were barking
as if the fear
was near

near so it was
it had then
took the roof

I had to look for an umbrella
too late as my curly hair
had fell down already
like a sadden smile

my husband ran out
he left me in his car

"Come my baby
there is no point"

I said, "no I want to stay
here
my beautiful cows
were would they go?"

The rain had then came
harder
as I saw the car
fainting in my eyes

then the windows
then the walls

soon my friend had came
and took me in her car

she asked, "is everything ok
thank God we could of died
"where is your man?"
now the rain had become pleasent

but I was still saddened
I hugged her crying



"when it rained it took my home
when it rained it took my feild
and when it rained it took away my love"



"a sadden time"


















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