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Danza de Lluvia



Mesmerizing grey veils,
clacking castanets

Gold lightning,
sizzling threads

Dazzling footwork,
bongos echoing

Breathtaking


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  • Pisces rainbow
    July 2

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    sounds like fun

    is it a band.

    spanish perhaps

    either way your

    your descriptions

    sounds entertaining

    God bless...