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Alone In Darkness

Alone in darkness,

locked in an old room,

I feel my fears rise.

I hear scary noises

and eerie voices,

whispering " put your head down."

Frightened, I oblige.

In front of the black backdrop,

a ghostly face appears.

The whites of their bloodshot eyes

matches the deadly paper in front me,

filled with alien markings.

I must solve these markings

before the chime rings

and my life ends.

But at 3:45 I have a Chance to escape

with my life.

But until then,

wish me luck,

for I am still stuck,

in dreadful school.

Author notes

This poem wasn't just by me... it was also by my really good friend Ariel(WorstOfTheBest). We wrote it in 5th grade...

Also.... as I was asked to... this poem is submitted in the contest "Anything" by VampireBlood.

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Comments

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  • Catacomb
    April 10
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    Very entertaining. Just need your prompt in your AN. Thanx


  • vampireblood
    April 9

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    Wow, I loved this. I never expected that ending. But I agree school is dreadful, I know I'm glad I graduated
    Thank you for entering.
    Also could you please put what was required in the author notes dear.

    ~Vampy~


  • new born
    January 31

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    Nice ending! It's all terrifying and then you surprise everyone with 'dreadful school.' You might want to change the second 'markings' though. I take it this is the best memory option?


  • Anemone-Rose
    January 9
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    ohh nice a way to add school into the poem makes it interesting, luck for my contest


  • moe12
    December 5, 2008

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    awesome

    I all also like this. School is just a nightmare waiting to happen or a memory replayed over and over again


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 5, 2008
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    wonderfull i love how you have left it till the end to say were you actaully are very well written. x i hve written a poem about how much i hate school as well its called "what awaits me at schol" i think you will like it. feel free to check it out. if you do so then leave a comment.


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 2, 2008

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    haha that was brilliant. Well.. it's a type of ghost. Very nice write. I don't know if he will like it though. But I thought it was great.


  • ImmatureRebel
    July 2, 2008
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    Great!!!

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