God has taken another beautiful angel home
As the day passes away
and the sun sets like it always does
The moon comes out to play
Tomorrow is another day
To live your life the way your daughter would have wanted you to live
She would want you to smile not cry for her
She is still looking down on you and saying Mommy
With each new day that passes by I am watching you
When the sun is out that's me smiling at you
When it's raining I am crying because I miss you
But when the cool breeze blows over you that is me giving you an angel kiss
to tell you I love you.
So remember as another passes you by your beautiful baby girl
Is watching you and is still loving you.
A contest entry
- Darling angel in heaven by munkiess.
450 points, ended July 4, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn your Green Trophies into Bronze, Silver or Gold (2) by FloridaGatorQueen.
600 points, ended July 17, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a very beautiful poem. Death of a child is a hard thing to overcome. I do not have children but I know other families that have lost children in death. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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"when the cool breeze blows over you that is me giving you an angel kiss
to tell you I love you."
this is something a few people have told me, but have never really put it into perspective like u have.. (is that the right word??) this was a great write.
thankyou for entering my contest, i wish you the best of luck.
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Thank you so much I enjoy poetry and I try to write things that are meaningful thank you for letting me join your contest I'm sorry about your daughter she is beautiful.
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