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Never Again!

Every time I try,
I try to make him happy.
But every time i cried,
It's because he cried.
He is the one
That made me feel happy.
Also the one
That made me feel free.
Free of pain,
Free of hurt,
And free from everything
That i hate.
Since he is not here
I never feel happy.
I never feel free.
I feel pain,
I feel hurt,
And i feel everything.
That i don't when i
Am with the one I love the most.
But i guess i will
Always feel what i feel
When i am not with him.
'Cause i most likely
Won't see him for a month.
And i am afraid
To hear his mouth,
Of what he has to say.
But never again
Will I feel what I feel now.
Never Again!

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