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The better life

This rap game is silly for a girl like me

i need to work on school and Ms. Colledge girl 2 be

I want to smile and laugh and feel like i am whole

but with no friends and no one to talk to I cant get out this hole

yea i know people sometimes we hang out

but drinkin and smokin sellin dope aint what lifes about

I want friends who want things in life,

more than parties, good days, and long nights,

yeah those things are all great to have,

but if you live like that all the time tell me what would you have?

if you could get up out the hood and make a life for your self

why would you sit around and watch them all do nothing for thierselfs?

Ima get up out this hood show my mama im doin good

ima make a pretty dolla hop out poppin my colla

show my homies whats really real whats real is the wordz that i spill

ill be my own inspiration baby this is my dedication

to my homies in DA WOOD homies in DA VILLE homies i thought was really real

call your self real be real and make the best

dont worry what ya haterz say dont worry bout the rest

from ridin in the car to poppin bottles in the club

if you was doin good you be ridin on dubz

get your self a job no need to serve or steal

cause ima be movin up ya feel me?

Chorus

the girl you never heard of I live my life and try so hard without my dawgs its lonely but, I want the better life

the girl you never heard of I hope my life will brighten up bye bye grey and lonely skies, I want the better life.


Author notes

my life has truly changed.
Ive finally found the strength to push myself to become something.
Ima do me ya digg

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Comments


  • Jake420
    July 9

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    Fuckin right

    I really loved the message you bring to the table. I think everyone can relate to this. True words just like 2pac.


  • DeGraw
    July 2
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    I can digg it!

    A happenin' pen! Cool to bone! Keep on writing and rhyming.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jennifer

  • Wow, I normally don't like rap, but this is quite amazing. I do like it. Though I see in the start you used good grammer then you started talking like you was from the hood. Does that resemble something?
    Good job. Keep this up.
    -♥-,
    Blood Princess