When we fell in love
our hearts turns into a child's hearts but
our bodes turned to lust
hot, sweet
dry, cold
I wrapped around you
you twisted around me
minds and bodes one
we were not meant to be
our souls would not rest
till we were apart
I never touched
like that again
never loved like that
I feel I never will
not with out you
dont you see I need you
like the dawn needs the night
like the sheep needs its hungry wolf
come back
be my night, my hungry wolf
hold me in your arms
cover me in dark, eat me up
never let go again
A contest entry
- When we fell in love.. by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your scenario of the heart with a expressions of the poetry is just wonderful ..I love this piece..and thanks for sharing it...
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raped in the second stanza should be wrapped..
good though by the way
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