Angel-Eyes
gazing back
i wonder slightly
what do you see?
a broken china doll?
a broken girl?
someone lost in how they feel?
someone who doesnt know what to say?
Building up to this moment
everything is said and done
somethings you cant take back
somethings you never say
Little things that can mean the world
never uttered to the person
you feel for
when did you know that?
Close your eyes
and take a deep breath
its okay, sweetie
to let everything fall down sometimes
Author notes
Well, what can I say, that hasnt already been said?
Questions? --> Ask.
Questions? Concerns?
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this was great. the emotion really captivated me.
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Thank You (:
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i like this so much. i love the angel eyes part.
and i love the end.
"Close your eyes
and take a deep breath
its okay, sweetie
to let everything fall down sometimes"
^^that's so amazing.
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thank you soo much :]
i try, i\and sometimes it just comes together.
thank you for reading
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It's true, it's so true what you say here. i read it over I liked it so much, I like the angel eyes looking back but I wasn't sure if she was looking into a mirror or it was a real angel, can i just interpret it my way?
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mhm
its always up to the reader :]
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yay, good elbi <3 love you...you're such a good poet!!!
~maddie
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yayyyyy
thank you :]
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