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Finishing the Constellation

I look up in the sky,
as the full moon shines.
As the stars make pretty,
constellation designs.

The cool wind hits my face,
and the grass tickle my feet.
I see one constellation,
that is incomplete.

I point my finger,
up in the clear sky.
I finish the constellation,
and wave it goodbye.

Please tell me what you think

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  • DawnKestrel
    August 29, 2008

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    Wow! That's awsome!
    It's short and effective... keep it up!


  • my Aim - Tomboy chi
    August 28, 2008

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    Hey! i wanna do something like that!!!

    that's so freaking awesome!! you have such a great imagination!! Keep it.... *glares At You Alert* dont... throw another kunai knife at me.... please????


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    July 7, 2008

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    Naw that's soo cute ^^
    I love looking at the stars and constalations and completing them.

    I just imagined an awesome tag for this, may I ask for your permission to borrow your poem for it?
    I send you a link to the finished thing

    Claire x