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Nightmares Fall

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Innocence falls
from raven wings,

holding fears in gentle touch,

as nightmares linger

on crimson lips


 ~longing to be discovered.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 10

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    Sigh.. my nightmares linger lately!

    Another beautifully written piece that speaks to me.. and well deserving of a trophy!


  • maralisa gold member
    July 3

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    wonderful emotions in your words
    as nightmares linger on crimson lips longing to be discovered.congratulations on your well deserved shiny


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 2

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    Oh, cool image - innocence falling from raven wings - oh, I see; very chilling - innocence taken, fears and nightmares linger, a sacrifice for goal of discovery.
    Congratulations on the bronze.
    Marlene

  • Alasar Minoko
    July 2

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    Been in that position before. I have always been able to somehow smile though . Best of luck.


  • going nowhere
    July 2

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    oooo... chill. i dont think i want my nightmares to be discovered... that just scares me...
    i'd much rather have my fears hold in gentle touch.
    wonderful imagery.


  • AngelWithDarkWings gold member
    July 2

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    this one speaks to me in many ways.. I love it and I can relate to it as well.. beautiful and dark.. excellent take on the prompt.. fantastic poem.

    good luck

    kat

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 2

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    a beautiful and powerful descriptive piece which speaks on many different levels and reflects a deeper meaning and life to the picture. well done
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