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If Only...

Tender wounds on soulless spirit
Constant bruising day after day

Watching babies in pushchairs
Smile that special smile
Gazing lovingly at their mothers
Knowing I will never see
That unconditional love from another
Never feel that special bond

Seven year olds asking questions
Answered sensibly by their dads
Total trust in their own oracle
Never questioning the answers given
No child will have such confidence in me
No one to pass my knowledge on to

Month after month hoping without hope
Praying, making bargains with God
Agreeing the impossible, if only...
If only you would let this happen
It's only a tiny request
What difference would it make to you
Please let this be
Let this wish come true
If only...

And with the passing of time
My wounds won't heal
My ridiculous hope keeps tearing at the scars
And so fresh they remain
With my constant refrain

If only...

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  • OldHatAndCat
    April 11
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    Great words and beautiful!

    You can write poet! Keep up with the grand reads. I really like your images. A captive piece. KJC


  • dragontuba
    July 5, 2008
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    And with the passing of time
    My wounds won't heal

    the truth is they don't......they never go away..only huant us as we try to be fathers or mothers but that day never comes...so we cry..becuase we feel hopless...Thank you for this

    YOur Judge
    Stehpen Zogal