Kota, meaning allies
For your handsome baby boy
And Levin, meaning heart
Yours to which he shall bring much joy
When you take in your arms
The life you have made
You shall know with your whole being
That the bad has been outweighed
Press your ear to her stomach
And listen to his heart
This changes the relationship
It's like a brand new start
Think of me, my dearest ones
When your brand new baby comes
And he teaches you the significance
Of a word called life, meaning love.
A contest entry
- Baby Names by Lucian Valcor.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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I loved the poem I think you did a oustanding job at it it flowed perfectly and it had a meaning to it awesome, the name is nice not to over the top out of this world but not so very normal boring either nice work and thank you for entering
Lucian" -
These two are very different and very sweet. I like the way you can say them out loud the only thing I have is people would have a hard time pronouncing them.
Thanks for the entry.
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