Language not laconic
Serenaded from organza lips .
Sensual savior from catastrophe
Raises me to
pleasurable
i n s a n i t y
Author notes
DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!
- hopefully, I haven't.
And i've got my fingers crossed that you count 'i n s a n i t y' as one word, not 7 little words
*Just the one picture of him is worth a thousand lyrics.*
ps, please dont read the link to the picture of the guy who can make me go weak at the knees until you've finished the contest, I don't want you to make a judgement on how beautiful this guy is
The link is for your pleasure, it's not needed for the poem at all, except a muse prehaps
http://not-crazy.deviantart.com/art/weakattheknees-90473739
A contest entry
- 16 Words by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended July 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All that I've got
Comments
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what is going on with the 15 year olds on here oh my goosh the swagger in this kind its loaded and i am loving it you impressed me i enjoyed this
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Pleasurable metaphors.
good luck
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