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All I can write is a quatrain

Sloth, that seductive pleasure,
Trickles away my leisure.
It's worth the sacrifice of pride.
Gluttony's goodies are on the side.

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  • celadia
    July 3
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    I know all about it, it's great isn't it?

  • Mila7
    July 3
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    Short but precise. Very well put lol I have to say i love bubbles

  • crimsondew silver member
    July 2

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    lol..Interesting quatrain...well written...but being asked to chose between the 7 deadly sins...hmm....dunno...

    All the best in the contest!