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Firebird E

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When creating souls,

Positive energy is simple,

The flashings of lighting crucial,

From spiritual speech,

Sealed with a spirit of apporval,

By the Christ voice...

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  • jackreed3
    August 3

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    Nice write... I loved your seconed to the last line.. Sealed with a spirit of apporval, I hope I get that seal... when my time comes...
    your friend in Poetry... JackReed3....


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman gold member
    July 12

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    A return to original innocence and 'closeness' to perfection.

    Should 'apporval' be 'approval', unless it's a word I don't know rather than a 'typo'?

    'From spiritual speech,'

    Beautiful clean write.

    Sol


  • myrataal silver member
    July 11

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    By saying: Let there be Light ...

    God illuminates darkness ... and all of his creatures carry his energy inside ... instigated to life and to Life.

    Deep poem.

    Love
    Myra


  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 9

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    Lovely,

    Thanks for sharing you sweet soul,
    as always, my pleasure reading you.

    -Timothy


  • Roker93
    July 7
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    Very spiritual
    well done

  • Tirrell
    July 5

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    A nice tribute. I like the flow and feeling of this one.

  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    July 2
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  • Pisces rainbow
    July 2

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    soul is purely positive energy,

    as is your write.

    God bless...

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