Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

The Presence

your ghost cuts me
the presence suffocating my mind
spinning me into coma
to see the blood of your lies
soft and inviting
glistening in a black abyss
brandish your thoughts
candy cane death
laughter in broken glass
the soft death
i waited
only to see cupid with a sword
i waited
and saw the skeleton
clothed in love
the pen cuts my thoughts
bleeding nonsense
i have done nothing


In a list

A contest entry

How does it make you feel?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • CatastrophicSmile
    July 22, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    wow this poem is amazing! i can relate so much. thank you for entering :]


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 2, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This was brilliant. I loved the ending. I really enjoyed reading this from start to finish. I hope you keep up the great writing.