Eternal youth
floats within us all
Familiar shadows
come to life
Souls reunite
for one last dance
Behind our backs
embrace one final kiss
Author notes
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In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended July 8, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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One final kiss ... what a delightful ending that touches the heart and creates feelings of warmth and happiness
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Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Thank you
Thank you so much for Bronze. This was such a fun prompt to work with
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very nice poem good luck
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Thank you
Thank you very much
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forever young! we dance, we laugh, we play...we age but the hearts are forever young
wonderful! thank you kindly for sharing my Pet for sharing with me
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Thank you
Thank you so much, your pet enjoys pleasing you
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Wonderfully done ` I just love the last stanza ~ best of luck in the contest
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Thank you
Thank you for your wonderful comment, my muse took a few days off and hopefully will stick around for awhile
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Thank you
Thank you for your wonderful comment, my muse took a few days off and hopefully will stick around for awhile
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