surrealism lives within the
boundaries of a sudden blast
of artificial creation
skies becomes powerful tools
of imagery and light when
brushed by air's cannon
step into another world of
eternity's call or destiny
fear the future less with a
refuge of flowered fields
and endless skies
climb with ease as your
mind fashions more
feel the air rush in streams
allow the wind to live in
hidden thoughts
smell the perfume in a field
of given pleasures
fall from grace before dawn
never again to lie alone
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2411/979.jpg?1214862637
Brush the Sky HansPeterKolb
20 lines
A contest entry
- Brush The Sky by In Too Deep1.
1175 points, ended July 5, 14 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tired of HM's? (I) by PatheticKt.
525 points, ended August 11, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent piece! Made me feel like I was in a beautiful dream and I love how you described the picture perfectly in simplicity
Almost looked like an enjambment here but it's all right since I still love how you've incorporated the feeling taken by the viewer of the picture and let the reader of this poem take that inside his/her mind as well ^^
Wonderful job you did here; I like it, all right!
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Such a treat to read. I loved the emotional environment and the beautiful imagery penned in this writ. A most enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.
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beautifully done! A winner on my score card!..Best to you in the contest!
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this is beautiful friend. a painted sky!
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