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Eden

Lovers
friends
dreams
i have them all
I'm not poor
I was never beaten
all my blood is in my viens
but i know
what we all know
i will die
my life will mean nothing
some will mourn
but i will be forgotten
my despair
my humanity
that's my madness

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  • mikethepoet
    July 3, 2008
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    good work good luck in the contest


  • grapefruite
    July 2, 2008
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    Very few people really matter, not in the history books anyway. Life doesn't matter.