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No Worries



Lying on the couch I close my eyes;
watch patterns of shadows and light play

Listening to a song I like on the radio dial;
I just want to live a simple life

Peaceful as possible,
by a woodland

Open meadow or 'glades;
with my paper and pen

Know I'll never fit again into
the mold intended for me by many

Nor will I fit into old slim sized jeans; I've
become much more of a loner than I used to be

The desire for most luxuries has
been painfully debrided from me.

I rarely shop, seriously;
my treat is writing.

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  • zillion
    July 4
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    I rarely shop either. Mainly because I'm so damned cheap though. And it's boring. It's always nice to read poems about people not caring about fitting in. While everyone longs to belong somewhere, it's more important to continue being an individual.
  • Wolf Mancini
    July 2
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    Sounds like you have found life!

    Great write my friend.
    Refreshing...back to simplicity.

    xo
    wolf

  • Wolf Mancini
    July 2
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    Sounds like you found life...


  • Pisces rainbow
    July 2
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    YOU JUST DESCRIBED ME!

    EXCEPT THE JEANS

    I AM WAY TOO SKINNY,

    WHEN I CLOSE MY EYES I GET A RAINBOW OF COLORS,

    IT IS VERY REALAXING,

    THAT IS. WHERE I GOT MY NAME FROM,

    I AM NEVER GOING TO FIT THAT MOLD AGAIN,

    NOR DO I WANT TO.

    SO SHOULD I BOTHER TO SAY I LOVE THISSmile

    OH I WILL, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS

    GOD BLESS MY FRIEND

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