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16 words (ADULT)

Your body entwined with mine
Our two sweaty bodies becoming one
Merging late into the night

Author notes

DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 6, 2008

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    very nice and sexual for a 15 year old you have what i call swagger which is good i enjoyed this thanks for enteing my contest

  • mcfreeman
    July 4, 2008
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    sweet sexteen


  • adora
    July 3, 2008
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    ...and nine months later? Just kidding

    good luck.

  • sex-c-ma2008
    July 2, 2008
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    i wanna read the whole poem?


  • XNevermindX
    July 2, 2008
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    Erm, wow, brilliant is all i can say so i wont bore you.

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