Yay Yay Yay its my big day,
Her plans will be diminished her life will be finished!
Revenge revenge- what a joyous occasion!
When all my little girlie's come out to play!
A grand occasion this will be,
A rope secured down from the tree,
A TRAP, A TRAP! this she will never know,
my enemy, my fun, fooled- everyone to see!
My snake like rope lowered down, down,
sitting quietly on the ground,
my foe came walking so happily,
The rope went up, her wig fell out!
Stupid girl, silly clown!
My foe only laughed and made it seem,
like she made some big joke,
we laughed and she laughed and the game had just began!
this evil plan just increases my fun!
One day I got an idea, my foe very near,
"I'm sorry, I'm sorry, your right I'm wrong"
"I should NEVER have done it, friends again?"
she put her muscle out for a shake and i shook,
Zapping my dear old friend, I'm now her greatest fear!
A contest entry
- Hate can be a Funny Thing! by Lady Disdain.
700 points, ends October 22, 10 entries
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Comments
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This is a nice poem, however I see very little about it has to do with my contest. nice write tho
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original write . . liked "Her plans will be diminished" and "My foe only laughed" . .
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I really love this poem of yours.. excellent job.. I love the last 3 lines.. I did enjoy reading the entire poem..
I was looking at the comments below.. when you enter a contest, sometimes the contest holder wants you to put in your Authors notes a saying or something.. recheck the rules and just place the statement in the box which says "any notes"
good luck in the contest
kat

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