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touching and twisting
my hair on their finger tips
I recollect on memories past
of days I once spent with you

days of love
long lost in dark corners of our fragile minds
minds we use to use for loving words
now conjures hateful, hurtful abuse
that we once promised would never occur

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Something that I couldn't get out of my head
07/02/2008

Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored

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  • Karayan
    August 12, 2008

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    I recollect on memories past
    of days I once spent with you...

    Such sorrow and angst inthis piece. Nicely written, and I am sure that they miss you at least as much. Keep the pen flowing, for emotions are the music hidden within the beat of the poets song.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 3, 2008

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    there are reason for those memories, they could be reminders, they could be hell, but i think the are to show that at least hell has some light. so i think they are both, keep it flowing