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Follow Your Rainbow

Rainbows are my sweet dreams of forever,
swaying with arched back across paths of grey.
Gently encouraging every firm endeavour,
yet tenderly colouring more of each day.
Transported to places where bonds won't ever sever,
delights I never thought of come my way.

Life takes on colours of so many hues,
every day so much brighter following my dream.
Yesterdays bleakness takes on a different view,
so much that's different, such a wondrous extreme.
Oh how my spirit feels as soft as morning dew,
heaven seems so close, I feel a part of God's scheme.

Follow your path and you will achieve your vision,
weather the storms and you'll be proud of your decision.




Author notes

Form: Harrisham Sonnet

Harrisham Sonnet poetry form was created by Indian poetess ~ Harrisham Minhas.

Harrisham Sonnet is written in 3 stanzas consisting of 2 sestets and a couplet.

For each of the stanzas, the last letter of the first word of each line is the first letter of the first word of the next line.
There is no restriction on the starting letter of the first line in each of the stanzas.

There is no restriction on the syllable count in this form, but it is required that the poem should have a good rhythm to it.


Rhyme scheme:

First stanza : ababab
Second stanza: cdcdcd
Third stanza: ee

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  • penman gold member
    July 6, 2008
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    Excellent

    Fantastic use of this sonnet form. You wove in such great emotions. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    July 2, 2008

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    This is an amazing poem. I like the positivity of this piece. It has been beautifully woven with positive and beautiful words.
    You have applied the rules of Harrisham Sonnet correctly.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    July 2, 2008
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    'somewhere over the rainbow. is where we all look for a dream xxx good luck


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 2, 2008

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    butiful mum

    good luck in the contest

    xxx cheeky xxx