Dance with me
In our memories
Of when we were young
Spin me across the floor
Catch me like you did before
gliding across the stage
our memories grow fonder with age
Hold on to our past
This dance may be our last
Author notes
photo prompt:google 20-70 words
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended July 8, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You created a world of romance and dance so lovely I don't want to leave
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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I hope that it's not the last dance. I hope that we all dance many like this. I would love to dance like this so lets just all dance, and never think about it being the last!
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I love this, it totally matches the picture and it so beautiful on its own. It kind of grabs you and holds you there forcing you to read it all, even though it is so short you can get lost in the lines. The last two really sum everything up, good luck!
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wow =] i like the way this poem is so short but it really captured me when reading
I felt like i was remembering those words as if they happeed.
And i love the last line
x
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