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Darkness Reluctant

It's all gone dark,
Maybe we'll die?
Or maybe not,
Maybe it's Death?
Or Evil,
A demon come to eat us?
An Angel come to save us?
Shivers down my back,
But a sense of ease,
No sight,
I can't breathe,
It's nothing I say!
I don't care,
Maybe the lights fused?
I'll fuse you!
I have to calm down,
Stop paniking,
What was that?
I'll tell you;
Chaos,
Dark,
Shiver,
Quake,
Death,
Gothic,
Mystic Turmoil,
Ghosts,
Evil,
And lights fusing,

- BOO!!!

A contest entry

Sometimes you argue with yourself...lol

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  • CharcoalScreams
    July 8, 2008
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    Loved it. I just had to keep reading! Good luck in the contest.

    Sammie,
    xXx


    • Domz101
      July 8, 2008
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      thanks Sammie, yo you should read the names i came up with...i just submitted them...lol, thanks again for the comment, Domz - One!!!


  • hamid
    July 2, 2008
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    Good

    Good work!