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Bonding (Silver )

Toy land of pleasure,

un cuff..

 

Chained passion,

tied..

 

Tangling our embrace,

bonded..

 

Sinful are our moments,

devilish..

 

Teaser a tease,

embrace.....

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Lock and Key
Exchange
by WAK

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A contest entry

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  • B Tha Revolution silver member
    July 2
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    I like your style and presentation, the pauses really gave it life, and made it more deep and hot!.


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      July 3
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      Thank you for hosting and for the Silver
      Enjoyed writing for you
      Julie x

  • Swtpoetryman
    July 2

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    UNCHAIN ME HEART!

    Thanks for sharing this devilish piece with me, Julie! You said a lot and left a lot to the imagination to with just a few well chosen words! GOOD LUCK in this contest with this sensual piece that fits the picture to a T! Is that you holding the key to me cock cage - and to me heart and soul? HE! HE!
    Love & Peace!
    Earl.


  • Beret55 silver member
    July 2

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    This is a novel condensed into a mind stimulating few words. Each line brings sweet thoughts and a wicked smile. And could only been written by a sensual mind. I love it..


  • onesugar silver member
    July 2

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    You have tied your words to the pic perfectly

    Good luck with this HOT little write

    ~sugar~


  • Abe 1
    July 2

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    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a tasty bit of bondage luv it haha
    gd luck 2 ya
    abe


  • daviscth silver member
    July 2
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    Another awesome piece of work sis!!!! Good luck in the contest.


  • MysticalRayne silver member
    July 2

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    ohhhhhhhhhhhhh very steamy write ~ very passionate ~ best of luck in the contest


  • maralisa gold member
    July 2

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    wow julie wonderful images of firey passions dance through your words as the passion reachs its peak in the toyland of pleasure and lust full of great emotion right up until the end Sinful our the moments, devilish.. Teaser a tease,embrace.....a great poem my friend good luck in the contest marinax


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 2

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    What images play within my mind Julie. Wonderful writing here. You have packed a lot into so few words. Bondage, can be such a sweet...dark pastime, don't you think? Hehehe.

    Very well-written indeed. And again, you have caught the emotion and atmosphere of this piece just right. Good luck Julie.

    Dark
    Love
    Always
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 2

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    Ooh. I really like this.. you did such a wonderful job..Very intense!!! lol.. I think you did great with that hot prompt! best of luck hun!! very sensual and hot!!!!!!



    Angel

  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 2

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    ooooooooooooooooo naughty.......!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol..... i like...... great job here..... thanks for sharing this and goood luck in contest....!!!!!!!
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